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This story came out of the idea of is there such a thing as big enough, and addiction.

This story is not for kids, it is not for the fait of heart. It dark and gritty.

I have literally written and re-weritten this short story no less than a dozen times. I worried about being to detailed about addiction. I worried about it being too dark. I went back and forth about if I should even write it, finish it, or even post it.
In the end I figured I would just let it be dark, I would write it, and that I would post it. It is without a doubt the darkest thing I have ever posted. It is very sexual in it's nature. It's a little bloody and a little gory.

It is completely not my normal fare and I know that. Even though the story deals with extreme Breast expansion, it is really about the power of addiction, and when is enough enough.

If you have ever know an addict then you will understand what it does to seemingly pretty decent people.  Even though this drug is completely made up I figure there would be some people who would try it out. Which is a statement all on it's own.

Comments as always are welcome... On this piece more so than a lot of the other things I write.

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I can't say I ever read a truly dark themed Fetish related story. Read some vore, but this was dark in a different way. I must say it may have been short, but well written, and really told a story about addictions and the horrible side effects that come with them. I'm very glad to see you branching out. This type may not be everyone's cup of tea. But this is a small example of what kind of writing you are capable off writing. I hope we get see a few more with this sort of message or close to it.

This work gets an easy high rating across the board, especially your impact. I suggest to anyone who is reading this Critique, to please read the story. It is a bit dark and may contain some stuff that is sensitive. But it's worth a read and has a good message.